Epic. The word I would use for this collection is epic. The book as a whole: epic. The poems individually: epic. This is in the sense that there are pieces in this book that are ten pages long and while many are epic in length they are also that in how content unfolds throughout the pieces. I find myself overwhelmed by Nikky Finney’s words, which is to say that this work fills the cup inside you and then keeps pouring. In some ways this book is the stretching and unfurling of “The Clitoris” (56-57), where most of what we know or have been told or what could bring us pleasure is “scrunched & hidden” Finney writes through and into what “Mapmakers, and others, who draw / important things for a living, / do not want us to know...”
I think it’s important to note that this book is hard to read. It begs to be read slowly, every word and line taken in, digested. What is beautiful in this work is sometimes confounding. I found myself lulled and mystified by certain stanzas, for example:
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The arc of your boneless back flags above me.
We are blind discovers, the nine seas pool
between us, blue curves, maritime, sheath of surrender, limbed night.
What sweeter world could be voyaged from
the earth’s center, pieced of figsuckle,
orange, the twice-licked skin of jet limes,
Breath of peppermint, braided, burning. (from “Orangerie” 54-55)
I read this and knew I wouldn’t possibly be able to fully comprehend it in a week and in a way that adds to the beauty and intelligence of the work. You read this and know it has something to do with love, and love making, violence and voyage, a sense of connection to the earth/the body - its smells, its tastes. It makes you pause and think, it draws you in close and refuses to unclench its grip, it lingers on your skin like a scent you can’t quite place until you return again to find the answers you’ve been looking for all along.
There were a number of poems I found myself both frustrated by and in awe of throughout this book. One such poem was, “Plunder” (23-32). This is one such way in which I felt the raw experience of a living through the Presidency of Baby Bush is used to construct a historical/communal conception of that moment. In the article we read, discussion of liminal space intrigued me. Kathryn Taylor writes, “In The Location of Culture(2004), Bhabha claims that people who live in the liminal spaces between cultures are in a unique position to build their own identities through present-tense performances - or lived moments that arise from immediate, raw experiences. It is through such performance that “objectified others may be turned into subjects of their history and experience” (178), and distinguished as “whole” apart from the mainstream.” The “1,836 ghosts of Katrina” become the subjects of their history. They “drilled & fought their way through every protective oil well put in their path and finally reached the other side…” they’ve become actors in a story that’s previously envisioned them non-actors.
Last thing I want to say is I appreciated this poem because I have been thinking about ways to write about #45. Of course looking to the past is a valuable way to see what old avenues can be traveled down again. Things haven’t changed as much as we think and this book hold some proof of that.
xoxo,
Rai
ReplyDeleteRai,
I am so relieved to read that you also felt you this was a tall order to comprehend in a week. I think these poems will marinate in my body for some time...
It sounds like these two stanzas you quoted are haunting you, or at least sticking to you, with their mystique and lull.
You know how they say your best thoughts occur in the shower? I think that's that is because when we least expect it, revelations can occur. Truth can rush in. That's what is so difficult about digesting monumental work in just a week -- you KNOW there are truths to be had, but you aren't "showering" as you're reading. At least I don't think. Your post has made me think about how reflection has to be built into the experience of reading...
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A poem that haunts me and needs to catch me in a moment of reflection is "Shaker: Wilma Rudolph Appears While Riding the Althea Gibson Highway Home."
Two powerful historical athletes are presented here, and Finney embodies them while examining her own failed romance.
I wonder, in the last line, who she is talking to when she says "run baby -- run" (herself, or Wilma, or Althea?).
Thank you for your post...
HJ
Rai, I like how you brought in Kathryn Taylor's work to talk about Plunder and how it functions in the "historical/communal conception." That poem though!? She really does an amazing job of illuminating history in such a raw and honest way without flinching. I like the idea f thinking of how to write about #45, because of how heartbreaking this time is in a historical/communal way, to give breath to it and to let it go. interestingly Asghar also gave space to the position, character and influence of the president in several instances including "When the Orders Came" and "100 words on 45's 100 days." how do we weave in our present and do the figures of power in our world show up in those narratives, I like that you are working through how to do this! Good Luck! -Alisha
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh, I can't believe you compared this poetry collection to the clitoris BUT I'M SO EXCITED THAT YOU DID AND IT MAKES SOOOOO MUCH SENSE. It's like she takes these moments - moments that are inherently epic, but that lose their charge within the news cycle so quickly: Katrina, hurricane after hurricane, each SOTU address -- and refuses to let them be small - she unfurls them like a clitoris so we can see their true size and power. I never would've thought of this before reading your post!!!
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